Something else for us to pull apart...

[Dave T]

Rather nice promo video

[RabbitRhinoovOZ]

Nothing wrong with that I think it's a goodn. I'm glad we don't have promotion & relegation hear in Australia but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't keen to see how it all plays out over there this season.

[UniSamX]

GET HYYYYYYYYYYYYYYPE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Wollo Wollo Wayoo]

Lot of arm folding going on there.

[Krytensmate]

Nothing wrong with that I think it's a goodn. I'm glad we don't have promotion & relegation hear in Australia but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't keen to see how it all plays out over there this season.

Whoa , hold on there , declaring interest isn't allowed

[EastLondonMike]

yeah real nice.. reminds me a bit of the current credits on True Detective..

[Saintslass]

Pity it finishes with shaun wane but hey-ho, can't have everything!

[amm]

Pity it finishes with shaun wane but hey-ho, can't have everything!

 I agree, not because I don't like him or Wigan, but it does end on a low rather than a high with his and DB's gruff low voices...would be better if Brian Carney had finished it off on a high

 

Normally these things are only shown in their entirety once, then you only see edited versions, so maybe a tinker or two in the right way, maybe putting Shaun & Dennis more in the middle.....

 

Having said all that,  I do think it's a pretty good video.

[C H Calthrop]

Is that the time, it's your time, it's my time, there comes a time, not one minute, one hour or one day, your whole life is the time, every time is the time this time next time any time.

Well that was painful. Some of those Wigan voices have barely a sentence to say and still deliver it as if reading by running their fingers under each word. Sean Wane.... it might not be fair criticism maybe he suffers from Catarrh.

[Futtocks]

Too much arm-folding, which you see in just about every sporting promo. Otherwise, not bad.

 

And not a spreadsheet in sight!

[Barry Badrinath]

the hashtag looks like it says #superbs

[EastLondonMike]

#superbs is an awesome hashtag.

[JohnM]

Excellent video, in my view.  

[JohnM]

Is that the time, it's your time, it's my time, there comes a time, not one minute, one hour or one day, your whole life is the time, every time is the time this time next time any time.

Well that was painful. Some of those Wigan voices have barely a sentence to say and still deliver it as if reading by running their fingers under each word. Sean Wane.... it might not be fair criticism maybe he suffers from Catarrh.

 

Its not fair or even valid criticism.  Your post complies with the topic title, though,

[fieldofclothofgold]

Nothing wrong with that I think it's a goodn. I'm glad we don't have promotion & relegation hear in Australia but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't keen to see how it all plays out over there this season.

I here you

[Bearman]

I liked it

[C H Calthrop]

Its not fair or even valid criticism.  Your post complies with the topic title, though,

100% valid criticism.

The complete babble of the script is stinking the place out. Was it the work experience girls day off so they roped in one of the cleaners to jot something down? Seems like it. And Wane needs subtitles, Sean Wane @ "everyminutemattuz".

 

It takes 24 seconds before it is apparent the ad is about "Rugby". 1 minute  22 seconds before it explicitly states "Rugby League", once, and it has about 10 seconds of actually exciting footage which could advertise the rugby to come. Lots of arm folding and babbling nonsense.

 

We now have even more diversity of branding with "First utility super 8's" and the defunct "Extraordinary Rugby" moniker still being used but no "Rugby League" on show. The most considered thing in this whole presentation is Carney being on message by getting the whole title of the Grand Final across The First Utility Super League Grand Final, fair slips off the tongue.

 

Its been phoned in! 

[chuffer]

Lot of arm folding going on there.

Lol, true...

[Garvers]

Is that the time, it's your time, it's my time, there comes a time, not one minute, one hour or one day, your whole life is the time, every time is the time this time next time any time.

Well that was painful. Some of those Wigan voices have barely a sentence to say and still deliver it as if reading by running their fingers under each word. Sean Wane.... it might not be fair criticism maybe he suffers from Catarrh.

 

This.

[JohnM]

100% valid criticism.

The complete babble of the script is stinking the place out. Was it the work experience girls day off so they roped in one of the cleaners to jot something down? Seems like it. And Wane needs subtitles, Sean Wane @ "everyminutemattuz".

 

It takes 24 seconds before it is apparent the ad is about "Rugby". 1 minute  22 seconds before it explicitly states "Rugby League", once, and it has about 10 seconds of actually exciting footage which could advertise the rugby to come. Lots of arm folding and babbling nonsense.

 

We now have even more diversity of branding with "First utility super 8's" and the defunct "Extraordinary Rugby" moniker still being used but no "Rugby League" on show. The most considered thing in this whole presentation is Carney being on message by getting the whole title of the Grand Final across The First Utility Super League Grand Final, fair slips off the tongue.

 

Its been phoned in!

One question. What are you doing in here when clearly you should be running Saachi and Saachi?

If you can do any better, stop wasting your time on here and make your own.

You truly are adhering to the topic title.

[JohnM]

This.

Not "this" by any stretch of the imagination.

[C H Calthrop]

One question. What are you doing in here when clearly you should be running Saachi and Saachi?

If you can do any better, stop wasting your time on here and make your own.

You truly are adhering to the topic title.

Its a pity the ad's creators didn't adhere to the topics title then maybe they could convey a clearer message and care that it has a positive impact on a target audience.  

 

If you want to see better go on YouTube and see a fan video on RL. 

 

I'm flattered that you think my 8 sentence critique of the ad would qualify me to run one of the worlds largest marketing agencies but I assure you it is the simplest and most basic of insights into what was actually shown. And it is never a waste of time having a considered opinion. Like I said 1 minute 22 seconds into an advert that is only 1 minute and 40 seconds long before "Rugby League" get a mention and a script filled with babble. 

[Amber Avenger]

Too much arm-folding, which you see in just about every sporting promo. Otherwise, not bad.

 

This trend seems to have spread to the cover of Rugby League World in the past couple of months too!

 

Interesting comments about Wane - I did think that was a bit strange too. Nothing against him, but didn't have as big an impact as I'd hope. Be interesting to see where this pops up, as that would usually say to me that the ad is preaching to the converted.

[JohnM]

Its a pity the ad's creators didn't adhere to the topics title then maybe they could convey a clearer message and care that it has a positive impact on a target audience.  

 

If you want to see better go on YouTube and see a fan video on RL. 

 

I'm flattered that you think my 8 sentence critique of the ad would qualify me to run one of the worlds largest marketing agencies but I assure you it is the simplest and most basic of insights into what was actually shown. And it is never a waste of time having a considered opinion. Like I said 1 minute 22 seconds into an advert that is only 1 minute and 40 seconds long before "Rugby League" get a mention and a script filled with babble. 

 

 

P;ease don't be flattered.Based on your post, its unlikely you'd get past the receprionist for an interview. Yes, its a considered opinion but really there needs to be some substance to it other than" its rubbish cos I say so"

[Stevo]

P;ease don't be flattered.Based on your post, its unlikely you'd get past the receprionist for an interview. Yes, its a considered opinion but really there needs to be some substance to it other than" its rubbish cos I say so"

 

So your reasons for pronouncing it "excellent" are...?